I look deep within your eyes
And I see the vastness of time stretching eternally into the past
I am overwhelmed
I am awed
I am humbled
Your gaze pierces the deepest recesses of my being
I feel the weight of all that has come before me
I feel all the joys of everything that has come before me
I feel all the sacrifices of everything that has come before me
I feel the heavy weight of responsibility
You look deep within my eyes
And you see the vastness of time stretching eternally into the future
You are sad
You are hopeful
You are humbled
My gaze pierces the deepest recesses of your being
You feel the weight of all that will come after you
You wonder if you have done enough
You wonder if the foundation you have built is firm enough
You feel a quiet hope and joy
You feel the lightening of the spirit that comes with death
We look deep into each others eyes
And we are the same
Hey man, Awesome post, especially when read a second time! =) Welcome to the blogging community! =D
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Thank you, I'm happy to hear my poems have lasting appeal. I should be posting more of them in the near future.
ReplyDeleteNicely done ... Welcome to potluck! Enjoy your visitors and visits.
ReplyDeleteGave me goosebumps!
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vivid and fun piece, love the way you do it, very thoughtful writing in highlighting both perspectives.
ReplyDeletevisit a few poets from our list near your own entry, thanks for the cool contribution...
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what a lovely, profound and intense piece!welcome to potluck!
ReplyDeleteMusing: Thank you, I am.
ReplyDeleteSilly: that is a very high compliment indeed.
Jungle: I am glad you enjoyed. I will be looking at others soon.
Bing: Thank you for the welcome.
Love the way you write :)
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I love the way you write as well.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting and enjoyable... I liked reading it and your back ground image is good one.. too
ReplyDeleteजय दुर्गा जी, जय काली माँ
Jai Durga Ji, Jai Kali Ma
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Thank you very much.
ReplyDeleteI am working on placing your link to Jingle Poetry blog roll,
ReplyDeleteI have been occupied by so many stuff, sorry for being late. it will appear within a week.
your poetry rocks.
keep it coming...
write a poem related to 7 sins, link to our potluck today.
Thanks for the support