Weather you walk your path in total darkness or blazing light you are equally blind. But blend the two into balanced portions and your path becomes much clearer.

Saturday, October 23, 2010

Love and Blood

Here's a creepy little poem... maybe it's my Halloween poem or maybe I just want your blood.


I love you so much

But you make love so hard

I have made so many sacrifices for you

I did not have to make them

But I did and I made them gladly

I made them because I love you

I still love you with all my heart

But I feel I must soon destroy you

Because you give me so little choice

So be warned my beloved

I come for you with teeth and claws bared

I come for your blood

I come because I love you so much


  1. Looksfar: That is quite a contrast to what you've been writing!! Reminds me of Twilight.. :) In death does their love reach its zenith. ~Punam

  2. *chuckles* yes it is, I decided to write up something spooky for halloween.

  3. I like some of earlier ones although it seems sad.

  4. Well you certainly captured its voice very well! Definitely spooky. Well done.

  5. Why the silence? We r looking forward to more writeups from you. All is well?

  6. Silver: sadness and pain is a defining concepts in most of my works. But so is seeing the beauty and light through those concepts, I'm glad you enjoyed.

    Sherry: Thank you very much.

    Punam: Sorry lot's of things came up in my life all at once and I haven't had the chance to write. But hopefully that will change soon. I'm fine, I just got very busy.

  7. keep writing, my friend.
    it is creepy, and also witty.

  8. Greetings, How are you?
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